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Thu, Mar 10, 2011 at 9:47 AM

True Love Never Dies By: Tonimarie D.

I wish we had more time together, but things didn't work out.Even though i'll always love you past death do us part. Sometimes things don't go as planned even when you wish they can. .....Because I understand it hurts me more I feel more, I breath less, I'm dieing. Dieing without you cuz I don't want to live You and i were a dream to most people it would never happen Our souls became one.......I understand that your gone cuz everyone else goes I just thought that you'd be different than most of those when I look at you I see me and I understand why we just can't be.......So without you I am nothing, I feel nothing, and my b reath is getting weak. Even though we are worlds apart My life began when we began our journey together as one........That's why it hurts so bad because together as one my life began and without you it will end. I was born with you and I will die without you.........I understand that your gone cuz everyone else goes I just thought that you'd be different than most of those When I look at you I see me and I understand why we cant be................Even though our souls became one and now your gone i'll never forget the first time you made me laugh i'll never forget the first time you told me you loved me i'll never forget out wedding day and i'll never forget the first time our bodies became one You take my breath away and I will always remember the day I was born............True love never dies, it only simmers Our love didn't die, it will never die and I can't wait until the flame of our love burns bright again I realized that things are going to happen that I can't control so sometimes I have to just let it be. But I will never let you go......... I understand that your gone cuz everyone else goes I just thought that you'd be different than most of those When I look at you I see me and I understand why we just can't be.........When I look up at the sky You will always be there and as I take my last breath Silence comes and I see you You've come to get me Finally.......I am re-reborn.

  1. kira! avatar

    On Mon, Mar 21, 2011 at 9:05 PM, kira! said:

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  2. barb_theBAD avatar

    On Mon, Mar 21, 2011 at 8:43 PM, barb_theBAD said:

    *rhythmically snaps fingers* woo! u go twin! ms. poetic!! lol :)

  3. KnowledgeHB avatar

    On Mon, Mar 21, 2011 at 8:14 PM, KnowledgeHB said:

    Damn Toni Barbz

  4. Kennnna avatar

    On Mon, Mar 21, 2011 at 11:09 AM, Kennnna said:

    Oh my goodness ! I love it toni , Its beautiful .. & deep .. & soo true .
    I lovee yuuh hun .
    muuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaahh !!

  5. Karatechic avatar

    On Mon, Mar 21, 2011 at 11:04 AM, Karatechic said:

    Tru love never dies fuh real.... Good stuff yo!! Love it!! Muahh :)

  6. Team_BreeziMinaj avatar

    On Mon, Mar 21, 2011 at 10:45 AM, Team_BreeziMinaj said:

    love it barb.

  7. DawnMulan avatar

    On Mon, Mar 21, 2011 at 10:44 AM, DawnMulan said:

    deep. deep i say!!! truuu :) i see you toni.... you better be poetic.... alright girl!

  8. nickiluvv avatar

    On Sun, Mar 20, 2011 at 10:47 AM, nickiluvv said:

    I like this poem lots its very deep. and you are creative.. and of course i have to show you LOVE! luvalwaysnickluvv

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